You know you've been on my mind..
And however much I lie,
You're the one i'll dream of every night
You're the one I wish to be with
but scared to say out loud.
P.S. wrote this under Sunday 160 by Monkey Man.
Actually typed it in my phone as a text message since it is the first time I took up this 160 Challenge.. wrote it for the one I wanted to send and then instead of hitting "Send", clicked Save Text and shared here :)
*Hoping you'll read and know it is for you!*
53 comments:
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All of my Sunday 160's start as text messages...easier to get close to count that way. Thanks for playing along. Really liked this one.
I'm glad u feel the same way as i do bout Poonam Pandey.. :P
Sweet princess!
everything said between 160.. nice :) really nice!
Aww! You shouldve sent that! Somethings are meant to be personal :)
Isn't that true. We say things in text messages we can't say aloud.
the time when m crossing through some random thoughts, i am not able to make out whether i shud say or not! but then i start the text and end up by saving it as a draft! these times are always special to me because what i actually draft becomes true :) :) Very special role in my life till now *touchwood* rest will tell you on call! and will steal dis post of urss fazuuu :P :P
smiles. i hope they read as well...and know...
sweet..
well done 160.
i understand that feeling. well said, nice 160!
I type it on my phone too!!
seems like our 160's are on the same theme but quite the opposite scenarios.:)
awww why dint u send it :)
This is so sweet! I hope that they read it!
Related strongly to this - excellent, perfect.
What a sweet little poem.. I wish I could recite this to some1, who needs to hear this.
Its perfect!
That is really a sweet message indeed.
Simply wonderful!!
Is there Something To Lose??
If yes, just hit the send button!!
Touching! You should have sent it!
Every night, I decide to send that message but give up at the last moment. It's very difficult, ain't it? :(
everything which is said in 160 is alwyas awesome. U c most of the affairs mature on text now a days.:)
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Strange feelings..
when we can share every little story, when we can discuss all those nonsense affairs.. but still somehow saying this, makes a heartbeat skip..
:)
aJ
Nice one. By the way, in your profile photo on Indiblog you look so much like my cousin.If you had not put up in your profile that you are from Rajasthan, I would have thought this was my cousin only.
Aww, whoever he is, I hope he's read this post! :))
just send it across :)pyaar kiya to darna kya :)
Nice one!!
Sometimes, words can't convey what one feels...nice words.
Thank You for the appreciating words, everyone :)
i hope it reaches and is intelligible to the intended person, the rest is just an excuse :)
:-)
i guess u conveyed the 'msg'in a short n sweet poem.. :)
Wish that msg was sent!
good one :)
Short, cute and sweet!! :)
poor chap - if he sees this he will feel sorry :))
you know you are awesome when you make others write like you :-)
here goes --
I know I’ve been on your mind
More than I deserve. You’re kind
Dreaming of me in dreams or real
Or any other time you can find
But
The urge to express if you defy
That darling makes it all a lie.
Short and sweet.... :)
Hmmm nice one... m afraid m gng to violate ur copyright as m thinking to send it to someone ;)...
Hmmm nice one... m afraid m gng to violate ur copyright as m thinking to send it to someone ;)...
Hmmm nice one... m afraid m gng to violate ur copyright as m thinking to send it to someone ;)...
Hmmm nice one... m afraid m gng to violate ur copyright as m thinking to send it to someone ;)...
I'm in the same situation...sigh....
having same story...
Like it!
liked it :)
I can relate well to the anxiety. Nice work! :)
That was beautiful
SEND IT!!
go on...
small ,sweet and an adorable poem!! :) I love 4 line and 5 line poems ,somehow I feel those lines express the most :)!!
very sweet lines.
sweet lines :)
http://saurabhchawla2345.blogspot.in/2012/12/the-first-kiss.html
good lines:)
Amazing blog!
Following you. :)
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